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Carbon graffiti,crisp curls blight white linesleft to phantom right,crafts conspicuous gray bruise,ghouls, dawn gliding home towords.[image...
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Craig! ~ "...dawn gliding home towords."I am very taken with this metaphor and your perfect close!EXCELLENT! ~ MairePS ~ Love the title too!
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I like this! I have a friend Roger who creates newwords in his poems. He gets a kick out of stumping us, Zaida.
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Craig,A wise poet once told me that a poemis like a peach, taste and if tweaks the taste buds, savor and swallow, if it tasteslike cardboard, spit it out.Well, I tasted this one, and it tastes like...
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Very nice, Craig, and very open to many different interpretations. I see a line of those strange words left by kids with black spray paint on a white surface that was supposed to remain white! Great(...
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Craig, since I am here and this one is so deserving, I am going to put a beacon on it. Jared
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haha, sarah, this one tastes like a strawberry, yeee..I like the unfamiliarity of syntax, very refreshing...WRITE ON!!!AD
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Craiggreatness!I love those last two linesAlways a pleasure to take in your muse at workThank you for the shareERik
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